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Jake Teale's avatar

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> David shoves her to the ground, and Laurie begins crying her journalist crocodile tears.

Sorry, no. This would be a stronger essay if you were capable of admitting that getting violent with people who write editorials you dislike is actually indefensible. If you can't make a distinction between violence and sitting up straight or coming prepared to class, you no longer plausibly seem like a mere civic nationalist, and the charge of fascism ceases to ring hollow.

It would have been better to point out that this is Evidence From Fiction, and that there is no actual reason to suspect a slippery slope from being a good student to being a thug - that this is a contrived plot device by the writer.

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